Monday, 11 April 2011

Mainichi Daily News

4 comments:

  1. Congratulations on placing a poem with the Mainichi Daily News, Rudi. It's quite a haunting haiku; I like it a lot.

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  2. Thank you Frank.
    About the haiku moment: it occured when I did a night walk with my dog. The street was empty. But a lonesome man still practised on the trombone at midnight in the parish room. I stood still listening and watching the rising moon.
    I made an effort to get some onomatopoeia, assonance and animation of the moon.

    Best wishes
    Rudi

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  3. Two good haiga with moon...that are slightly disparate in meaning...but both good ones, Rudi :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. Thank you Devika.
    I revised the "trombone" for a long time. I got the "haiku moment" in 2009. It is worthwhile to occupy with older texts on the search for a better version. Finally I am satisfied with this result.

    Best wishes
    Rudi

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